That One Profound Day
- Zoë Ariel Dunning
- Mar 16, 2018
- 2 min read
Updated: Apr 10, 2024
Written in February 4, 2014 for Biblical Worldviews class about an imagined radical spiritual encounter.

Before that one profound day
I was sorrow-filled and without a hope
Lifeless and always moped
Wondering if He heard me pray
Before that one profound day
I dragged myself from place to place
Always seeking to see His face
Wondering now what He had to say
On that one profound day
I sat unmoving in my room
With my artificial heart
I saw from the corner of my eye
Something quickly dart
What could it be?
A mouse or a rat?
I quickly picked up the baseball bat
I was ready for the creature
“Scat,” I yelled, “Scat!"
What I did not know
Is that I was not prepared at all
For the sight before me
So I fell down hard, utterly appalled
The sight before me was astonishing
I fell on my face
Praying, “Grace, grace!”
At that moment I knew
That indeed, He is true
The being in front of me
Was like nothing ever before
Its presence alone
Made me cry out for the Lord
It was of pure light
Of that I am sure
How else could it be
So blindingly bright?
It inspired joy and fear
I knew without a doubt
That Jesus was here
Imparting the wisdom of old
Unspoken, pouring out truth
Making my blood run cold
Chills seizing me now
The angel lifted his hand
Beginning to sing
It foretold of the Holy Land
Where high above
Martyrs and saints like me
Complete their time here on Earth
And then take their leave
“Where will you go?”
The angelic being asked
“Will you come join us in heaven
Once you have breathed your last?”
“Or will you go with all the others
Down to the pit of hell
To live forever in regret
Wishing you could pay off
Your eternal debt?”
It was at this point
That I could take no more
I began to sob
And fell to the floor
“Save me now!”
That was all I could say
The being’s visit was done
So it faded away
I was left to contemplate
What to do with the rest of my run
Should I build an orphanage?
Feed the poor in Iraq?
Maybe help the old lady
Whose car just wrecked?
“Forget all that!”
I felt the voice in me say
“Just live out your life
And all will be okay.”
“You have strayed away
Do not turn your back on me
Because the going gets tough
Submit and you will be set free!”
From that day on
I have stayed true to the Lord
I admit I have fallen since
But I trust Him that my inheritance
Is more than six cents!
I know this because
Hey, He promised
Everything is okay
If I try not to falter
And do not go my own way
So you see, God does appear To the very broken like me As He did on that one profound day And revealed the everlasting key
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